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Wendy - I love how your banner definitely gives off the vibe of your shop right away! It has good clean space and makes a statement. The only thing I can think to add would be to place what your shop is, in your banner too. (I am guilty of this as well.) Some buyers won't even stop to read the shop title to know what you sell. Other than that....9.5!
Posted at 12:39 am Jul 7, 2012 EDT
I like your banner but think that you have too many fonts in a very small amount of space. The name of your store is some what lost. The text that catches my eye 1st is your slogan "An experience in colour". I would suggest only have a max of 2 different font types, and experimenting/playing by bringing out the name more and subduing the slogan. This can be done by various means; making the text bolder,and by bringing it down more; and reducing the text of the slogan making it smaller and changing it's colour to purple (a lighter tone or ever grey). I think the use of the yarn is great and colourful as the slogan suggests!
Posted at 11:14 am Jul 7, 2012 EDT
Great banner! It's simple, clear and bright. It definitely caught my eye.
One suggestion -- maybe instead of the flowers in your banner, replace that with a picture of one of your items. Then it would portray what you are selling.
I would give it a 9 out of 10!
Posted at 11:56 am Jul 7, 2012 EDT
I love your products. However the pictures seem to be a bit dark and so is your banner. Shop title is unclear which means the colour of the title is too bright? Maybe brighter banner and darker title can help you to improve your banner! I hope it would help you! :)
Posted at 6:37 pm Jul 16, 2012 EDT