Custom Critique of Etsy Shop Text or Website Text Such As About Page or Item Description Up to 600 Words



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**Please compare this item with “Top 3 Strengths and Top 3 Weaknesses of Your Etsy Text” and "Etsy About Page" to be sure you are choosing the option that is right for you and your shop. “Etsy Text Critique” gives a detailed critique of a single piece of text, while “Top 3 Strengths and Top 3 Weaknesses” gives a broader look at the writing style used in a variety of texts within your shop."Etsy About Page" gives custom-written text for your About page, rather than a critique of text you have written.**

Just words on a screen? The words you use to describe yourself and your items can make or break your Etsy shop. Don’t leave them to chance!

This item is a custom-prepared point-by-point critique of one piece of text from your Etsy shop (or any site you use to conduct business), either your About page or an item description. The text may be as long as 600 words, and it may either be “live” in your Etsy shop or, if it is still in the draft stage, may be submitted in either pdf or Microsoft Word format. (If the text you would like critiqued is longer than 600 words, you may purchase additional copies of this item so that the total is at least one critique for every 600 words, or you may specify which part of the text you would like critiqued.)

Upon purchase, you will download straightforward instructions for providing us with the text for which you want a critique. Trish O’Connor, not only an Etsy shop owner but also a professional editor, will examine the text closely and then prepare a list of bullet points approximately one page long with an appraisal of the text, including specific suggestions of how to make it stronger and notes of any grammatical errors. This critique will be sent to you as an email attachment in pdf format.

Usual turnaround time is approximately two to three weeks.

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Trish O'Connor

Trish O'Connor

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111 reviews

5 out of 5 stars
5 out of 5 stars

I wanted a more open, in depth critique than friends and family members could give. Having Trish point out a couple of weaknesses was exactly what I needed in order to craft a better "About Page" and achieve an honest connection with my buyers.

Rebecca Apr 2, 2016

5 out of 5 stars

I needed a rush critique done by the the end of the week. Trish not only delivered it to me earlier than promised but it was in depth as always and in addition to corrections, she gave me great suggestions. Third time using this service. Highly recommend!

Response from Trish O'Connor

I can't thank you enough for your kind words, and for your business!

Anthony cueto Mar 29, 2022

5 out of 5 stars

2nd Time using this service. I am an established seller with 15,000 sales and still gain very valuable information I have been able to use to improve my shop. Very pleased. Thank you Trish.

Anthony cueto Jan 21, 2022

5 out of 5 stars

Thank you. The critique was thorough and gentle. It contained straightforward, actionable guidance. I highly recommend Trish’s services.

Mary Oct 18, 2019