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This is the thread to peer review/critique the shop of YOURNAMEHERE's Shop located here:
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Thank you very much for taking the time to look at my shop!

Official thread to review my shop here www.etsy.com/shop/motorcitycreations


Please be respectful in your reviews.

Please critique:
banner, product, prices, photos

Shops reviewed by me : www.etsy.com/shop/WormsBowtique, www.etsy.com/shop/seamripper01

Posted at 1:55 pm Apr 27, 2012 EDT

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Hi Jenna,
When I first saw your banner, I thought "motorcycles" because the font is so thick and heavy. I like that you used colour that comes up in your pot labels. I like that you used the same font for your description in your banner "100% natural soy ..." ties it in. Just felt the MotorCityCreations font was too hardcore and biker for the types of products and market you have (comfort, coziness, fragrance and feel-good).

Your product seems well made. I like the photos you took of them too. Against a crisp and clean white background, it denotes bathroom clean.. zen, health. Good image, nice angles and close-ups. I had to click on one of the categories to figure out exactly what you were selling in 4 oz. tins. You say you sell bath and body products, so I was hoping to see body creams etc. Then figured out they were tins of candles. Might be helpful to shoppers to add one more word like "4 oz. tins - candles". Like the names you give the candles.

Prices seem like normal craft market pricing. Hope you do well.

~ Johanna

Posted at 4:01 pm May 10, 2012 EDT

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